Pretty in Pink
Posted by christianrasmussen1981 on February 9, 2010
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IMDB rating: 6.30 Plot: Young Andie is one of the not-so-popular girls in high school. She usually hangs out with her friends Iona or Duckie. Duckie has always had a crush on her, but now she has met a new guy from school, Blane. He’s one of the rich and popular guys but can the two worlds meet? |
Actors: Stanton Harry Dean,Cryer Jon,Spader James,McCarthy Andrew,Haynie Jim,Clay Andrew Dice,Anders Jamie,Comedy,Drama,Romance,
what twist should be added to this story?
my friend and i were extremely bored so we decided to send this document back and forth (on google docs, if that helps) and we took turns writing a couple of sentences for our story. the story really has no plot and no ending? we just started today. my character is elena, and she’s very focused and serious about karate. my friend’s character is bubbles (don’t ask -.-) and she’s boy crazy and clumsy and girly. what we do is write a couple of sentences and share the file and take turns. here’s a little part of it:
At the moment, it wouldn’t be possible to let out an overly annoyed grunt and moan when the sensei expected us to run in place. "Run in place with the music." He told us, playing a heavy metal song, that was very soft, but still. It felt pretty awkward running in place with everyone while we were in this huge circle. To avoid the awkwardness, I looked down at my feet making sure I didn’t move forward. "The song is 8 minutes." He said and gave a smirk. "We’ll be doing this for a while. If you’re sweating and panting now, wait to see what’s coming." He chuckled. My sensei was the strongest, toughest man I have ever seen. How should he expect us to do what he can do? But I guess we had to push it to the limit and try as hard as we can. This was 10x more P.E. We ran in place. I found myself following the beat of the drums. Everyone caught on and we ran at an even pace. Was it minutes, or hours that passed by? I couldn’t tell. I felt numb. The feeling when you see what’s going on, but things are racing through your mind. All I saw was the floor bouncing, which was just an illusion because I was looking down and the floor seemed as if it came closer while I ran in place. Snap out of it.
I was loosing my breath. I donno why this tough guy was making us run in the same spot for 8 minutes. Thats just crazy. Well if jason could do it, i had to aswell to impress him. I would do anything for his attention. If i had to fart in his face i would do it. Wow, i cant feel my legs, and my toes were turing pink. I started going faster, and faster. I just ate before i got here, which was a VERY bad idea. Now i was starting to feel like i needed to throw up. I felt my lunch comming up and BAM! next thing i know, im vomiting all over the place. On the walls, on the parents, on EVERYONE, even the sensei. It was just my luck that it was Projectile vomit. Oh my gosh, i thought to myself as i lied on the floor over my vomit. How did this happen? Next thing i saw was Jason looking over me, with vomit all over himself. "Are you okay?" he asked me. As i tried to reply, i threw up on him.
the first paragraph is mine and she second is hers. i see this story going nowhere, so any ideas? i know this is completely pointless but its fun.
also an additional question.
i need some story plots and such for future stories i work on. any interesting ideas? its not for school, these are just personal stories i write in my spare time but i appreciate it. thanks.
How about just then bank robbers run in shooting back at cops the getaway had obviously gone bad and now your in the middle of a hostage situation. Is this the time to use what you’ve learned or hold tight with fingers crossed? is this a good Adrenalin situation to get closer to the one you like?
other storys
– finding a dead body berried in your back yard
– Elena and Bubbles both wake from comas in a hospital and find that there the only ones there wear is everyone??
ruprick | Feb 06, 2010
Farting is rude and you don’t fart in front of people u just meet
Liz | Feb 06, 2010
